Said the lock to the keyWill you marry meWe'll live forever moreHere upon this weathered doorIt's charming and quaintWith it's peeling paint
Said the key to the lockIt's the best on the blockIt's sheltered in shadeSo we'll have it madeYou and me togetherForever
hummmm How sweet
ReplyDeleteI love this poetic love dialogue...
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smiles. that was a fun verse to read...i hope they live happily ever after...nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteThe lock and the key make a perfect couple :) Neat poem, Linda! The rhythm makes it fun to read.
ReplyDeleteA fun and sweet poem...it just flowed, love it!
ReplyDeletefun and charming...enjoyed it :)
ReplyDeleteThis sounds so very familiar, but I can't put my finger on how.
ReplyDeleteOh well! It's quite a fun verse!
What a delightful poem, this was a treat to read, Linda! I think the two best adjectives to describe this piece can be found within it, "charming and quaint" :)
ReplyDeleteI liked the idea of the lock and key as a couple. This poem is perfect for the picture and a delightful read.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this:~)
i wonder what my lock and key are up to.
ReplyDeletewhat a great enjoyable poem..so simple and yet so very very clever...loved it..cheers pete
ReplyDeleteMost Excellent...Loved your poem
ReplyDeleteCute and clever. Good wordplay. Thanks for posting. Gay
ReplyDeleteSo wonderful to read my friend. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Hugs x
ReplyDeleteThis is SO good, Linda! Creative, cute, playful, thoughtful. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThat's an absolutely charming poem, reminding me of poems I read (or was read) as a child.
ReplyDeleteDulce- Thanks for stopping by. I glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteBrian Miller- Thanks, I think they were meant for each other.
Talon- They do don't they. I must confess this was inspired by a magpie photo, for which I had already made my submission. So I kept this one back, and found a new pic.
SuziCate- Glad you enjoyed it.
Caty- Thanks.
Eric Alder- Familiar, huh? I hope not. Otherwise I was inside someone else's head when I wrote it. Thanks for visiting.
Sam Liu- "Charming and quaint with it's peeling paint" is my favorite part. I'm glad you liked it too.
Sara- Thanks, it was fun to write too. See above comment to Talon - I had to find another picture since I wasn't using this as a magpie. The original picture was the lock on "Through the Door". I think this door captures the essence of the poem.
n. davis rosback- Maybe you'd better check on them- you can't be too careful. Thanks for the visit.
Pete Marshall- Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
G-man- Thank you. Nice of you to visit.
Beachanny- Thank you. Glad you liked it. Thanks for visiting.
buttercup- Thanks for the visit; glad you enjoyed it.
Davina- Thank you. I am finding writing, all kinds of writing, fun.
Glynn- Thank you. It does have kind of a sing-song quality to it.