Choices, changes
Life rearranges
He chooses
He loses
Should have chosen
The other one
Choices, changes
Life rearranges
Now he knows
And he chose
The other one
Written for the 30-day creative writing challenge hosted by Nicky and Mike of We Work For Cheese. Today's prompt is The Other One. This is the 13th mind-numbing day of this challenge. Check out the Linky at WWFC to see what everyone else chose
Also posted for dVerse Poetry.
very nicely written and very true!
ReplyDeleteAh, life is full of "if onlys" isn't it. Well put.
ReplyDeleteChoices and choices! Well done!
ReplyDeletetoo bad we can not always go back and remake those decisions but it is where we find experience...
ReplyDeleteHa ha! Very true. If only we could choose again when we get it wrong :)
ReplyDeleteGreat! I am jealous! I wish I had written this!
ReplyDeletecool little lyric...a sweet song
ReplyDeleteWell written and thoughtful--and true!
ReplyDeletelaughingmom- Thanks!
ReplyDeletenonamedufus- It sure is...thanks!
P.J. - Thank you.
Brian- Experience is a good teacher, isn't it. So is this writing challenge, and today I get 2 for 1. I always love a good deal.
Babs - I am sure everyone would like a do-over at least once in their lives.
Linda- Thank you so much. I couldn't think of anything write about, so I did a poem. Glad you liked it.
Old Ollie- Thank you!
Tina- So glad you enjoyed it.
I love the "Life rearranges" part. Excellent poem, Linda!
ReplyDeleteWell done! Very well done!
ReplyDeleteNicky- Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
ReplyDeleteMeleah - Thank you. Lessons learned, right?