Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Nursery Rhyme Redo: Jack and Jill

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Jack and Jill took some pills
They got from their drug dealer
Jack fell down upon the ground

And Jill called an herbal healer

Posted for dverse poetry.

13 comments:

  1. oy hopefully they learn their lesson...yikes...smiles.

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  2. I'm laughing, though I probably shouldn't be--a thoroughly modern rewrite.

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  3. Brian- Do those kind ever learn? ;)

    hedgewitch- Oh, please laugh, it makes my day!

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  4. Meleah, thank you! [takes deep bow]

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  5. I love that! It's lots better than the original!

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  6. I agree with Linda Medrano...MUCH better than the original!

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  7. Wow very different and I am glad that Jill decided to call a healer to get him some help
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/20/the-fait-of-our-lands/

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  8. Linda- Thank you. [bows deeper]

    Nicky- Thank you. [falls flat from bowing]

    Ann LeFlore- Yes, fortunately she stayed upright this time.

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  9. hahahaahahahahaahahahahaah....... that is creativity! and it says volumes about this intensely insane world we live in today! Thanks for this wonderful break from the seriousness of life....

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  10. johnallenrichter- Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the break.

    Sara- I hope this helped some with the lemons. :)

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