Wednesday, June 13, 2012

The Other One


Choices, changes
Life rearranges
He chooses
He loses
Should have chosen
The other one

Choices, changes
Life rearranges
Now he knows
And he chose
The other one

Written for the 30-day creative writing challenge hosted by Nicky and Mike of We Work For Cheese.  Today's prompt is The Other One.  This is the 13th mind-numbing day of this challenge.  Check out the Linky at WWFC to see what everyone else chose

Also posted for dVerse Poetry.

12 comments:

  1. very nicely written and very true!

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  2. Ah, life is full of "if onlys" isn't it. Well put.

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  3. Choices and choices! Well done!

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  4. too bad we can not always go back and remake those decisions but it is where we find experience...

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  5. Ha ha! Very true. If only we could choose again when we get it wrong :)

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  6. Great! I am jealous! I wish I had written this!

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  7. cool little lyric...a sweet song

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  8. Well written and thoughtful--and true!

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  9. laughingmom- Thanks!

    nonamedufus- It sure is...thanks!

    P.J. - Thank you.

    Brian- Experience is a good teacher, isn't it. So is this writing challenge, and today I get 2 for 1. I always love a good deal.

    Babs - I am sure everyone would like a do-over at least once in their lives.

    Linda- Thank you so much. I couldn't think of anything write about, so I did a poem. Glad you liked it.

    Old Ollie- Thank you!

    Tina- So glad you enjoyed it.

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  10. I love the "Life rearranges" part. Excellent poem, Linda!

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  11. Nicky- Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

    Meleah - Thank you. Lessons learned, right?

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